On Friday 27th of April, we went to Mekarsari.
We did many fun activities.
One of them was mud fight.
Mud fight activity was so thrilling.
First I stepped into the mud ,
and it felt I had stepped into mud with worms in it.
I touched and held the mud then I threw it at my friends.
My friends were so angry and throw mud at me. It's like I was throwing rotten eggs at my friends, "sorry,oopsy".
Suddenly Gian threw a big pile of mud at my face and my hair,
I felt like I was eating a dead fish. It tasted salty.
I was so angry so I threw mud back at Gian.
We did many fun activities.
One of them was mud fight.
Mud fight activity was so thrilling.
First I stepped into the mud ,
and it felt I had stepped into mud with worms in it.
I touched and held the mud then I threw it at my friends.
My friends were so angry and throw mud at me. It's like I was throwing rotten eggs at my friends, "sorry,oopsy".
Suddenly Gian threw a big pile of mud at my face and my hair,
I felt like I was eating a dead fish. It tasted salty.
I was so angry so I threw mud back at Gian.
After the mud fight we had to take a bath because our body was covered in Mud.
I felt lucky because I could join this activity.
I felt lucky because I could join this activity.
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Natasha
Joshua
Juhee
Tiana
Kathleen
3 comments:
Your score is 10/10 because you have no spelling mistakes and you did it well!
Grace, I gave you 8 out of 10 because you did a lovely job. You used desriptive sentences, paragraphs and, although you didn't upload a picture, you did add a lovely title.
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